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Sounds clean but maybe add something more to the chorus
Even if u dont its greatAdSense 336x280Sounds clean but maybe add something more to the chorus Even if u dont its greatYeah… I also feel that the chorus needs a twist… maybe if I add the "I Love Rock’nRoll" phrase from Joan Jett, and then leave it to JayZ… well… what do yuo think?
And thanks for the feedback..!
AdSense 336x280[quote quote="BuBa":3dckidj5]Sounds clean but maybe add something more to the chorus Even if u dont its greatYeah… I also feel that the chorus needs a twist… maybe if I add the "I Love Rock’nRoll" phrase from Joan Jett, and then leave it to JayZ… well… what do yuo think?
And thanks for the feedback..![/quote:3dckidj5]Yeah I thought the same thing but then i looked and i think verses would be to different if u know what i mean. First you have "I love rock n roll" and then Jay-z prolly say something like "99 problem etc" it would sound good not saying that but lyrics would be just meaning less. Maybe if u cut and make ur own chorus like cut off words. Just an idea.AdSense 336x280nice mang! you even inspired me for my next mixtape, which i will make a post about shortly..
good work!AdSense 336x280nice mang! you even inspired me for my next mixtape, which i will make a post about shortly.. good work!Thanks
Yeah I thought the same thing but then i looked and i think verses would be to different if u know what i mean. First you have "I love rock n roll" and then Jay-z prolly say something like "99 problem etc" it would sound good not saying that but lyrics would be just meaning less. Maybe if u cut and make ur own chorus like cut off words. Just an idea.Yeah… I could cut up Jayz’s Lyrics, mash them to Joan Jett’s Chorus and come up with something… Let’s see!
Appreciate the colaboration!
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