new club tune ive made let me know what u think

I like the overall electro sound but it is, for my liking, far too repetative. It just does the same thing over and over again. Nothing happens, nothing to get your teeth into at least. I have to say I’m not a big fan of the vocals either, the cutting close to the start sounds out of time, and over time the vocals just become annoying. I personally think it would have been better to use smaller parts. If it were me producing the track I would recommend using the vocals mainly during quieter parts (maybe with a kick and the synth filtered) to add more emphasis to whats being said… as if its important and should be listened to.

There is some good sounds going on but I think the builds could be a little better… The synth during the build is nice and powerful but I think at least on one or two the beat should hit like a freight train when it kicks in (the kind of thing that usually gets people going nuts on the dancefloor) but it doesn’t.

I’m really sorry to sound so negative, the track isn’t all that bad really but for me its just missing something, something that makes it stand out… Then again, what do I know?