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August 26, 2009 at 4:48 pm #550935
bluff.ParticipantHey guys, just looking for some creative and constructive feedback for my track
it’s the first actual dnb track ive produced as yet so trying to get as much feedback as i can 
thx.
Link: [url:2jcoimnj]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cv8EggTD7vI[/url:2jcoimnj]MVM.
AdSense 336x280August 26, 2009 at 4:48 pm #671205
bluff.ParticipantHey guys, just looking for some creative and constructive feedback for my track
it’s the first actual dnb track ive produced as yet so trying to get as much feedback as i can 
thx.
Link: [url:2jcoimnj]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cv8EggTD7vI[/url:2jcoimnj]MVM.
AdSense 336x280August 26, 2009 at 9:44 pm #671219
ChunkyEatsMyDinnerParticipantHi M.V.M,
I moved ur post here as its a more appropriate place to live
It could do with a tweak on the levels and mastering, particularly the intro.
Also mite be nice to play around with the drum pattern throughout the track, make
a subtle change for 4 bars, add something else for 4 bars, change again etc.
Really like the track tho, love the little pitch bends in there.AdSense 336x280August 27, 2009 at 2:07 am #671227
bluff.ParticipantHey chunky, thx for the move – didnt know which section to put the thread in
and thx for feedback really appreciate it
AdSense 336x280August 27, 2009 at 3:06 pm #671251
GMoneyParticipantCrazy. Love the cymbals/rides you used.
I find the arrangement quite nice, but the track kind of lost energy at the wrong time for me. Around 1:17 it picks up and gets a little bit more energetic, but then around 1:38 it goes more mellow again.
I agree with CCM on the drum patterns needing to get switched up a few times. Think I could do with some kind of hoover or some heavy synth melody in addition to what’s there at certain points as well.
Overall still a good track, nice work!
AdSense 336x280August 27, 2009 at 3:15 pm #671253
bluff.Participantthx for the feeddback Gmoney, i appreciate as much as i can get

yeah i understand the energy pick ups/loss’s but that just seemed logical when i was composing it :/ just seemed like a nice arrangement but i can see where your coming from.
Yeah now listening to it i can understand the heavy synth lines in there but i’ll just take the advice for next time
thx a bunch for replying
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