dirty house tune i did feedbck welcomed

Everything up to about 4 minutes has the makings of an excellent minimla/tech track which with a few tweaks I know could get played in many sets by alot of DJ’s i know, after that I think it falls apart.

I’d lose everything after 4 minutes and save that for another track all together, expand what you have up to 4 minutes to maybe 5-6 mins and add a couple of variations glithces to that main synth… beef out the bass a bit and I think you have the makings of a great track, I love that bloopy synth!

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I actually liked the part after 4:00, gets even better after 6:30. I must say, though, by 9:00 it has gone on a bit too long, maybe you should cut it to 8:00.