Bazaar – Radio Mars

Hmm, ok don’t really know where to start from….

Beat definitely needs work, so does bass, and the melodies are a bit .. unorthodox.

The bass is just a massive Poly synth note… needs a bit variation. There’s something weird going on with the hihat, I think you’r time signature is off. Maybe you should import a dubstep track that you like into your software (i.e. logic) and literally tear it apart and see how they made it.. seems like you need to learn a lot of the basics of tempo, time signature, rhythm and beat programming.

All that said, there’s potential!

Keep at it!