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February 1, 2008 at 1:31 pm #544565
BattenParticipantI think this is nearly finished off now been playing around with the keyboard again and liked the melody used for the tune so… I thought that I would remix with some parts of the vocal as u do…….
Hope u enjoy folks or if not can let me know either way what u think, any feedback is good
AdSense 336x280February 1, 2008 at 1:31 pm #642500
BattenParticipantI think this is nearly finished off now been playing around with the keyboard again and liked the melody used for the tune so… I thought that I would remix with some parts of the vocal as u do…….
Hope u enjoy folks or if not can let me know either way what u think, any feedback is good
AdSense 336x280February 1, 2008 at 1:50 pm #642504
djspyderb4everParticipantHas kind of a trippy feel to me. I like it.
I would suggest increasing the volume of the vocals a bit, it seems a little low.AdSense 336x280February 2, 2008 at 6:15 pm #642579
BattenParticipantmay increase a little but cant get rid of a lot of the background from the vocal as used the pella from here. Will look into though.
Glad u liked it not been told it sounds trippy before but its all good
AdSense 336x280February 2, 2008 at 10:24 pm #642595
DJ LevantParticipantSounds great mate, really like where you went with this track. Great tune.
AdSense 336x280February 4, 2008 at 9:08 am #642680
BattenParticipantThanks Levant glad you liked it, didnt want too much change just a club number using parts of the vocal and melody, keep it simple so to speak……
Anyone else got any feedback
AdSense 336x280February 4, 2008 at 12:35 pm #642683
fatenkParticipantgreat track. I like the piano in background.
its not agressive, great to chillout.
greets!AdSense 336x280February 4, 2008 at 7:31 pm #642695
BattenParticipantGlad u like it Fatenk
Thanks 4 your feedback on the track
AdSense 336x280February 4, 2008 at 10:47 pm #642701
Mario.OliverosParticipantI liked the beat, though I think you need more movement. Work a bit on the bass, you can get it sound a lot more dynamic. Personally I didn’t like the vocal in the end, you can either remove or work adding some echo/chorus on it.
Keep it up!
AdSense 336x280February 7, 2008 at 9:51 am #642873
BattenParticipant[quote quote="Mario.Oliveros":1ojl6zul]I liked the beat, though I think you need more movement. Work a bit on the bass, you can get it sound a lot more dynamic. Personally I didn’t like the vocal in the end, you can either remove or work adding some echo/chorus on it.
Keep it up![/quote:1ojl6zul]
Thanks for your feedback Mario.Oliveros I know what u mean with the percussion and bassline but this is not the finished track it is the basis of how its going to be, when I get time will play around with it to give the movement it needs. For the ending I dont really like it either just threw it in at the end, probably will be removed. Thanks for your honesty and your time to listen and feedback.
AdSense 336x280February 8, 2008 at 2:08 pm #642932
ldje3ParticipantSimple, but Great tune !
I’m agree with djspyderb4ever and Batten when they say the volume of the voice is too low.
Congratulation.
In France we say : Un grand bravo !!Jérémy LEVANTEZA
AdSense 336x280February 10, 2008 at 6:07 pm #643075
BattenParticipant[quote quote="ldje3":3ikvxead]Simple, but Great tune !
I’m agree with djspyderb4ever and Batten when they say the volume of the voice is too low.
Congratulation.
In France we say : Un grand bravo !!Jérémy LEVANTEZA[/quote:3ikvxead]
Thanks Idje3 glad u like the tune not got any spare time for at least a few weeks so will probably adjust the volume and make a few tweeks…..
AdSense 336x280February 19, 2008 at 5:37 pm #643715
bigcon6409Participantlike this tune alot… good work mate!
AdSense 336x280February 20, 2008 at 9:42 am #643778
otgParticipantNice simple drum pattern, really don’t like the off-beat bass, although it’s growing on me (not enough though). Nice breakdown at 2 minutes, but the hand-clap sounds a little artificial, needs some proper reverb and less delay, and the tail of the cymbal crash coming out of the breakdown sounds like the end’s been clipped off.
Having said all that, it’s got great drive to it and it flows well. If you could get a cleaner acapella or bring out the vocals more, it would work extremely well in commercial clubs.
AdSense 336x280February 26, 2008 at 9:48 pm #644346
BattenParticipant[quote quote="otg":7xzzr8cc]Nice simple drum pattern, really don’t like the off-beat bass, although it’s growing on me (not enough though). Nice breakdown at 2 minutes, but the hand-clap sounds a little artificial, needs some proper reverb and less delay, and the tail of the cymbal crash coming out of the breakdown sounds like the end’s been clipped off.
Having said all that, it’s got great drive to it and it flows well. If you could get a cleaner acapella or bring out the vocals more, it would work extremely well in commercial clubs.[/quote:7xzzr8cc]
Thanks OTG for getting back to me – still working with this track when get time and will look at the bass as did want a bit deeper also hand clap is not the one I wanted to use need to go through my samples for better crisp sound. Just noticed as you have raised my crash is strange…. have no idea what has happened there but yeah needs fixed. This is the only pella I have no others I have heard that are better, also no good at trying to clean pellas up more so will maybe sit and rack the brains on a way to filter the vocal give it a diff edge.
Anyway glad u like as an overall track as maybe when get round to it will post an updated slightly modified version.
AdSense 336x280February 28, 2008 at 4:16 am #644539
benj1989Participantnice chilly 😉
maybe bring the tempo a little down?AdSense 336x280 -
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