Jay-Z ft. Lil Wayne – Hello Brooklyn (rmx)

[quote:3htzpxka]Sup brahh

Sounds pretty nice my bro. Youve successfully turned what sounds like a mainstream east coast track into an underground east coast track. Propzz on that. Everything is on time and sounds on point. I also like that youve completly changed up the hook, suits the song. The only thing id say is where the hook starts, you get "hello Brooklyn" and then half of the 2nd line from wayne. Just cut that bit off so it blends in bit more and so it only says "hello Brooklyn".

Overall pretty nice job, i like it a lot 4/5. Would of givin it 5 if the hook blended in bit more at start like i was saying.

Peace[/quote:3htzpxka]

Thanks for your quick reply Dj L!th!um! I’m glad that you like it and I agree with you about the beginning of the Hook!
I wasn’t sure where I should cut it but I also guess it would be better to cut it after "Hello Brooklyn"!
I will fix that and upload it again … and I do this only for you my friend

[quote:3htzpxka]i peeped all ur trax good job.i could quibble about some hooks not matching the music ,but overall i enjoyed yor imagination[/quote:3htzpxka]

Thanks for the compliment and in particular that you have taking time to listen 2 my music!!! I really appreciate this! THX

peace

Here’s the Link of the new version (changed Hook):

http://www.zshare.net/audio/71694227f4984aa2/

I hope you will like it more now Dj L!th!um? I do!

[quote:3d5fx7jo]Im not lil wayne fan (kinda enoyes me lol) but I love beat and Jay-Z parts (thats just personal taste). As for the beat, I would pan percs a bit to the left and lower the volume so that snare can come to life a bit (just an opinion, if a beat is yours). Another way is to add bottom end of a snare around 100hz-250hz and raise percs (just a bit) on around 12000khz to add air.

Hope I wasnt too "anal" lol but i really like the song

Cheers,
B.[/quote:3d5fx7jo]

Thanks for your hint BuBa! … Yeah it is my beat and I will definitely try it!!!
The new version I’ve posted sounds although a little bit different (I made some other eq settings)!
Maybe you can tell if I’m on the right way THX

peace

[quote:3tlztid1]much better ma bro, like it a lot

peace[/quote:3tlztid1]

Yeah me too, thanks for the hint bro!!!

[quote:3tlztid1]Pee Oh that beat is dope… I really can’t stand Lil Wayne so it’s hard listening to him, but the track definitely has that underground, Soundbombing type vibe… Good job[/quote:3tlztid1]

Thanks for your feedback Obscure!!! Really appreciate it!!!!

peace