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December 2, 2007 at 9:00 pm #543853

brapko
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Here’s another one str8 out the studio.
Tell me what ya think guys.

B-rap

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December 2, 2007 at 9:00 pm #638270

brapko
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Here’s another one str8 out the studio.
Tell me what ya think guys.

B-rap

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December 2, 2007 at 9:35 pm #638272

vhsplayerchris
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I’m gonna be honest. Your rapping is on time and the beat is rather fresh, but your lyrics are kinda flat. This track could use some more interesting dialog, or some variations in style and rhythm could occur more often. Some wax scratching wouldn’t hurt either. Little accents here and there makes it less redundant and makes it sound like the song was been worked on and not just a dude rapping over a beat for three minutes.

Its just my opinion however.

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December 2, 2007 at 10:21 pm #638276

brapko
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[quote quote="vhsplayerchris":2ggdxnfe]I’m gonna be honest. Your rapping is on time and the beat is rather fresh, but your lyrics are kinda flat. This track could use some more interesting dialog, or some variations in style and rhythm could occur more often. Some wax scratching wouldn’t hurt either. Little accents here and there makes it less redundant and makes it sound like the song was been worked on and not just a dude rapping over a beat for three minutes.
Its just my opinion however.[/quote:2ggdxnfe]iight man.. appreciate the honesty… ill take that into consideration for now on

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