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December 6, 2007 at 2:55 am #543895
DJ SchematicParticipantWell here’s my third track for you guys.
I’d appreciate some feedback.
AdSense 336x280December 6, 2007 at 2:55 am #638598
DJ SchematicParticipantWell here’s my third track for you guys.
I’d appreciate some feedback.
AdSense 336x280December 6, 2007 at 2:44 pm #638627
SeanzaParticipantYeahhhh, I like this! Pretty much totally goes man, saving this one!
AdSense 336x280December 6, 2007 at 7:37 pm #638669
acheadKeymasterI like this too! Really good!
Keep it up!!!peace
AdSense 336x280December 7, 2007 at 2:01 am #638703
adethfcParticipantReally liking this.
You have done a real good job with this one.
AdSense 336x280December 10, 2007 at 11:07 pm #639059
brapkoParticipantHmm dude… im not sure what i feel about this one. There are def. good parts and the beat makes me wanna nod my head with it, but i can’t get over the "If i ruled the world" chorus on it. it just sounds terrible and out of place. Maybe suggest sampling it in certain places and then messin with the pitch to make it sound on key. As far as the rest, its all good, except for the Luda verse. Having remixed this verse many a time, i know it’s hard to find the actual flow, but this is about a bar slow. The last thing.. the blending of the mix in the beginning seems to be out of place.
The good side: The Dre, Game, Eminem and Nas had me goin man.
Work with it.
B-rap
AdSense 336x280December 11, 2007 at 6:14 am #639086
andre_destiny_marissaParticipantTrack is BOMB!
AdSense 336x280December 11, 2007 at 3:30 pm #639147
SteppParticipantNice flow on everything except the beat change up at 1:11 Other than that nice trak bro!
AdSense 336x280December 11, 2007 at 7:39 pm #639177
turntableParticipantgood work, imma check you out on myspace
AdSense 336x280December 11, 2007 at 9:32 pm #639187
dj_abdParticipantbrapko wrote:Hmm dude… im not sure what i feel about this one. There are def. good parts and the beat makes me wanna nod my head with it, but i can’t get over the "If i ruled the world" chorus on it. it just sounds terrible and out of place. Maybe suggest sampling it in certain places and then messin with the pitch to make it sound on key.i agree, as a whole the song fits together well, but the lyrics sort of conflict, there’s a relatively serious/ deep nas/ laureen hill track, and then the others rapping don’t really fit with the mood. I think the beat fits best with the latter.
AdSense 336x280December 11, 2007 at 10:04 pm #639191
SolarliteParticipantThat beat change is kind of odd, I’m not sure it quite flows. The different acas do sort of conflict but on the whole, I like it.
AdSense 336x280December 11, 2007 at 10:20 pm #639195
GMoneyParticipantThe Eminem part is off beat, the intro is off key, the beat is played out big time.
The rap parts sound ok, but just kind of really average to me.
Just bein’ honest.
AdSense 336x280December 12, 2007 at 3:43 am #639226
DJ SchematicParticipantAll of your insight is helpful. I seriously thought this song was perfect until i heard some of the comments… I made this track over 3 years ago and I’ve lost all the pieces to be able to make adjustments
I would have sped it up a little bit, matched they Key (thanks GMoney), and made a more consistent message lyric-wise.
Thanks again and keep up the thought provoking comments
AdSense 336x280December 12, 2007 at 4:07 am #639228
GMoneyParticipantYa sorry dude, I don’t mean to offend, really I don’t. Good to see you’re keepin’ at it though!
AdSense 336x280December 12, 2007 at 8:23 am #639239
SeanzaParticipantDJ Schematic wrote:I seriously thought this song was perfect until i heard some of the comments…That’s why feedback’s a good thing to get, there’s been many a time where I’ve been playing with a track for so long it sounds like that’s how it’s supposed to be, if I’m bored of listening to it, I’ll render it & post it here, take a few days away from it, read the feedback and take it from there, usually comes out onto a winner.
Peace
AdSense 336x280December 16, 2007 at 8:56 pm #639579
acheadKeymasteryea this was a good mix….
nothing bad to say just keep doing your thang….AdSense 336x280 -
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