the cypha

You’ve asked us to step up & show you a flow,
But the street section is where a think this should go.

It obvious you don’t take time when writin a rhyme,
It’s a fact, and you should know, this is ma 4th line.

A don’t really now how to do a freestyle,
A used to write raps, but then a watched Green Mile.

That movie is whack & your rhymes are slack,
Let’s see if your big enough to hit me back

For you, 6 to 8 lines wasn’t good enough,
So you gave 10 lines that were really rough.

Your lyrics are just copyin’ & pastin’,
So that makes me the only person who’s participatin’.

Am not the 1 who should be payin attention,
You need to wake up and see the new dimension.

In lines 3 & 4 what were you tryna say?
Oh a get it, Mummy said you can’t come out to play.

DiSilEnTa$$AsIn wrote:

😆 is this a battle???

I guess so. I just put in my 2 cents.

whitewolf_40909 wrote:

[quote quote="Prequel":7j9909c6][quote quote="DiSilEnTa$$AsIn":7j9909c6]:lol: is this a battle???

A wouldn’t say so with the lack of lyrical talent…[/quote:7j9909c6]
its just sposed to be people dropping verses and i meant to upload a beat buit i got lazy so now it has just turned into diss club. there is onlyone rule of diss club…[/quote:7j9909c6]

What part of family site don’t you understand?
You need to take the venom out your lyrics and take the gun out your hand.

There’s no need to diss anyone, we’re all here to make friends,
We all have a story, and here it never ends.

So stop actin’ all gangsta gangsta, puttin’ on a front,
You model yourself on Dre, Snoop, Game & Big Pun.

Show us some lyrics without addin’ violence,
When a check this topic later, al bet there’ll be silence.

[quote quote="whitewolf_40909":1tx44m80]ooooo. what the hell you mean cut and paste
my rymes are original with humour interlaced
my ryhmes kill at first sight
ill eat you up like a turkish delight
i be compaed to shakespaere
with the laws of english i do adhere
and kt who the hell are you
from the looks ofthose words you belong in blink 182[/quote:1tx44m80]

Blink 182, that’s a rock band, I guess that’s fine
Adhere, nice vocab, that word, I bet you can’t define
I wasn’t trying to start nothing up on this website
To this topic, all I wanted was to bring some new light,
An alternative rap, an alternative reality
I got some fans with these words so back off me.
Your words, interlaced with some witty humour
Your words need a spell check, better fix that grammar
Adhere to your laws, and I’ll adhere to mine,
Keep the violence on the low, and we’ll all be fine.
Ok, maybe my rap, isn’t all that great,
Your raps are nice, I wont debate,
But once this cypha’s all said and done,
You’ll remember I’m the one that had more fun.

Whitewolf, a didn’t go over ma limit,
This ain’t a competition but al still win it.

You said that you’re over, that wasn’t us,
You were actin’ like 50 Cent and screamin "what up cuz"!

Am also white, and don’t own a gun,
Who needs bullets when you have lyrical ammunition?

Am on ma 7th line now so a better watch ma mark,
1 day you might hear me say your name on 106 & Park.

A take it the day you found out was today,
As those lyrics are shockin and have got time delay.

Your just another 1 stickin with the mould,
Screamin about how you’re gonna get a gun to hold.

You also ran over with a rap of 10 lines,
You wanna get yours and a wanna get mine’s.

You might not think ma lyrics make sense,
That’s cause they’re futuristic, yours are past tense!

i be the first person to see you on your back
be the first 1 to strik out and attack
now thats a fact you can’t f*** wit that
while the beat goes up and down
like a mary-go-round
now beat that 4 a 6 line freestyle!

keep it clean ok i will
just chill
not been agresive just been progersive
and holing it down
like i do while you rhyme like a clown
so go back to the circus
because you cant merk us
you’le look like mucus
while i rock the show
if this was live
i’d be rapin to five
you don’t understand do you?
you met your maker

1 thing first it’s B Rabbit from 8 Mile haha let’s get into this…

first thigs first keep it clean
i ain’t a bad dream
i’am your worts nightmare
but i’m sure i don’t care
and why would i be anything like B Rabbit
i don’t come from detroit i ain’t never been to the usa
i’m from the home of the queen the sweet Uk
because it’s like that i don’t have to pay
if you read this in a hundred years time you’d think a poet wrote it
but maybe i am a poet and i didn’t……. realise

i may only be 15
but i have studied the game
since the rise of the name
i can go as far back as the beging
while there was singing
sugar hill gang was rapping
N.W.A. was getting banned and creating beef
ice cube was a joke but not like b rabbit and have big teeth