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hi everyone jus thought i would post a link so you could have a little listen to my second song made with fruity, i have learnt a little bit more than last time i posted a song, i would love to here what you honestly think.
its called hip harp
thanks very much 
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Damn... that's your 2nd track? very impressive considering... here in the states it's called "Happy Hardcore" and I know f@ckall about it so it would be unfair for me to comment much...
Cymbals are too loud tho IMO... scares the sh$t out of me each time they go off.
A few instruments are distorted (kik, snare) but I'm guessing they are supposed to be... cool snare rolls... speaking of r@lls, does remind me of the last rave I went too, oh around '92.
um... the way it ends so abruptly.. no DJ mix point?
keep at it, for sure.
Billy |
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thanks billy really appreciate the feedback, yer i know sum of the stuff is distorted and a bit too loud, you see i aint mastered the track yet, lol i dont know how to do it., as for the quick ending its just a rough copy if you like,
lol last rave you went to was in 92? bloody hell i was only 10 lmao
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Same goes here matey, not my kind of thing (Happy Hardcore) but it's a very professional sounding track considering it's your second track ever. By ever, do you mean that you've released to the public or literally the second one you've put together?
Have a look at my Jimmy Hendrix remix if you get a chance, totally different to this like but feedback would be appreciated. Links in sig.
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thanks for the feedback crin, this is the second tune i have ever made on fl studio, i havent sent anything out to record companies because am only a newbie, i have only been doing this for a little while, maybe a few months, plus i dont really know any record labels to send to, and am a bit worried that they could steal my songs if the were good enough.
i will check you song out now and leave sum feedback, thanks again for taking time to view my work |
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Second tune ever? Cool! But it's obvious that there's alot you need to get in FL... (Not that i some elder in the job) The sound is raw. The drums used are also raw. But nothing a few EQs couldn't fix. And if the mix was more balanced the whole thing would sound more quality. (Sorry for the bad criticysm and english here) But The form actually is very very good for a newbie! (Yeee ) And the vocals, although plain, are fitting perfect. Anyway, with another few hours of work, this could sound really great.
Go on makin music, and with time come the results. Beleve it or not, this thing is better that 50% of stuff i listen on ACIDplanet... Go see it your self, and when you do, it'll only give you more will to do better than the most come-and-go musicians. Just go on doing your thing!
And if you got the time, check my second rmx ever (and about the 6th completed song ever) in the urban section... Topic is "Chemical brothers - Galvanize (Wip's Darkside rmx)" and don't download the first one Darkside. The second one (DHB rmx) is made 97% of Fruity and vocals. Fell free to PM me if you wanna know about anything. |
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thanks mate, i will cjeck your stuff out in a min, will pm you and ask you about eqing my track coz i really dont have an igloo??????
cheers  |
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