Remix of original rock song – feedback?

I think its a great start, reminds me of Calvin Harris, and its worked out rather well for him.
I would suggest a longer white noise with a sweeping filter at 10sec.
And as much as im sick of hearing all pop and dance vocals sounding like R2D2 i think the vocals
would benefit from a little autotuning or vocoder.
The Killers would be a good example, they very tastefully use vocal transformers. If your a Logic 9
user you can actually get the project file from Apple they used for one of their songs and see how it was made.
(im still on 8 tho )

Nice idea about the mutual feedback, anything to encourage feedback gets a thumbs up from me