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Just a little sommet i've decided to play around with just thought i'd try a different type as oppose to speed garage!
Samples are from full metal jacket and i probably wont finsh this tune either.
all comments tho pleaee.......... 
http://www.camma.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/FMJ.mp3 |
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wayjin
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hmmm....
Firstly, the kick needs more punch, i've figured that thats how ur kick sample sounds, so try overlaying another kick sample for punch, nake sure its quite a bit quieter than the main sound u wanna get.
secondly, the clap sucks make, change it, add a little reverb to it at least!
thirdly, the hihat is not in tune with the actual tune, so i suggest putting in another hihat before the original kicks in and make sure the new one has a little more resonance to a flat sounding hihat.
fourthly, the bass changes are nasty.
and finally, the synth needs more fullness, try adding distortion with a lot of compression, that might work!
vocals are cool though! |
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badman
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| wayjin wrote: |
hmmm....
Firstly, the kick needs more punch, i've figured that thats how ur kick sample sounds, so try overlaying another kick sample for punch, nake sure its quite a bit quieter than the main sound u wanna get.
secondly, the clap sucks make, change it, add a little reverb to it at least!
thirdly, the hihat is not in tune with the actual tune, so i suggest putting in another hihat before the original kicks in and make sure the new one has a little more resonance to a flat sounding hihat.
fourthly, the bass changes are nasty.
and finally, the synth needs more fullness, try adding distortion with a lot of compression, that might work!
vocals are cool though! |
thanx for the feedback, as i said before i dont normally make HH but i'll still have a go on the side  |
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| thats cool man, im just saying how i think u cud improve it. |
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badman
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| wayjin wrote: |
| thats cool man, im just saying how i think u cud improve it. |
no worries |
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| Some advice: keep more frequency when filtering your kick, start the track with the current stabline, and break with another one. Add some hall reverb to the claps, throw some timestretching in there. "Hit em with the hard beats, and keep bangin!" =) |
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YO BADMAN,
I DON'T CARE WHAT THE OTHERS SAID.I THINK IT'S KICK A$$ .KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.YOU DON'T NEED FANCY LAYERING FOR IT TO SOUND GOOD.JUST LIKE BACK WHEN HOUSE MUSIC FIRST STARTED.THEY JUST USED THE BASICS.A DRUM MACHINE AND SAMPLES.THE MUSIC STILL SOUNDED GOOD. |
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