NEW DREAMS REMIX(BIGGIE ft JAY-Z & GAME) - ACAPELLAS4u - Your #1 Resource for FREE Acapella Downloads

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June 21, 2006 at 3:37 am #534375

DJ_Patron(A-zona)
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I started this today, its not the best, but leave feedback.

This is incomplete, cuz i am not sure if it sounds good, which is why i havent finished it. SO PLZ LEAVE ME FEEDBACK. I NEED IT.
[url:a7an6v1z]http://www.filelodge.com/files/room22/589822/My%20Remixes/Dreams%20%28A-Zona%20Remix%29.mp3[/url:a7an6v1z]

oh and this download is just a sample, if u guys like it, then i will work hard and start over.

Feedback is appreciated

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June 21, 2006 at 3:37 am #592005

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I started this today, its not the best, but leave feedback.

This is incomplete, cuz i am not sure if it sounds good, which is why i havent finished it. SO PLZ LEAVE ME FEEDBACK. I NEED IT.
[url:a7an6v1z]http://www.filelodge.com/files/room22/589822/My%20Remixes/Dreams%20%28A-Zona%20Remix%29.mp3[/url:a7an6v1z]

oh and this download is just a sample, if u guys like it, then i will work hard and start over.

Feedback is appreciated

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June 21, 2006 at 6:03 am #592012

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is there not any feedback?

I know i have posted this a few times already. Everything was just all messed up tho, but its all good now.
Leave Feedback

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June 21, 2006 at 7:00 am #592017

Lexus
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Hey Bro,

Jay sound aight on this one but the Female Vocal is off Pitch, it Just dont Gel…. The Chorus with the Game needs fililing a little as its a little plain…… There is also a few timimg issues here and there (definatley at the begining).

This will be a Hot Joint when the project done!! Keep at this one and Holla at me when you have finished….

Keep doing your thing, Stay Active….

Peace

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June 21, 2006 at 7:11 am #592019

s3android
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I don’t know the original so I can’t compare.. but the music sounds like it fits nicely

err.. I dont like the beginning …. with the chick singing over.. sounds off (even though game is on..) maybe she is just too off key and too loud in the mix

the main part is very cool… I hate the chrous but is fits very nicely… jay z seems to fall in and out of time to me tho.. but that could be his spoken word style (altho.. almost all rap is spoken word.. haha. you know what I mean)

biggie’s verse sounds too fast or is off a note.. but I dunno if you were just lettin it go

Overall.. GAME keeps it in time. but it seems like it keeps falling in and out of it

A zona huh ? You from AZ.. ?

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June 21, 2006 at 7:22 am #592023

Seanza
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This haz potential! But Faith Evanz IZ off beat, wouldn’t say off pitch, the chorus iz weak! The biggie verse needz chopped & placed, he comez in too early, this really iz a good concept tho!

U should def stick at this, am sure we’l all be pleazed by the final cut!

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June 21, 2006 at 1:45 pm #592045

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i almost had the idea that it didnt sound that good with faith, so what ima do is completely start it over and go from there. i will post an end result soon. I now have the song in my head flowing so perfectly

thank you all.

oh and yes i know everything was a lil off beat, i didnt want to spend too much time on it, if it doesnt even sound good (Im prety sure you all know how that goes)

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June 22, 2006 at 11:30 am #592088

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This is a preview of the song. Its still not finished, I know biggies verse is WAY OFF!!!!! I just neeed more feedback!!!!!

For those who heard the first sample of this, please leave feedback and let me know it it improved or not. thanks

Im a beginner at all this o bear with me.

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June 22, 2006 at 11:57 am #592090

jimbean
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i really like the beat u make that?

if u need any other big verses i can mix em 4 u i got alot so get at me, juicy without faith might be usefull

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June 22, 2006 at 4:41 pm #592099

s3android
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it sounds like it is a lil too slow now (see if you can get jay z to say his "saids" on the claps..sounds like that’s where they should fall – not all of them.. but there are a few that should)… and Faith’s yelping and whining is still off key.. I know it is in the background a cappella with Jay and no way to cut it out.. but maybe tune it.

I still think the vocals and music mesh nicely

Listneing to it again.. it isnt just slow… it sounds like it goes from slow to fast…

(hell .. maybe it is on beat theoretically.. but still needs to be finagled)

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