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| hope you enjoy, tell me what you think... |
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Right, just had a listen. Here's a spot of (hopefully) constructive feedback.
My main problem with the tune is the percussion. It's rather stiff. You really need to get some dynamics in there. A spot of reverb perhaps. Plus the toms got on my nerves, I'm sorry to say.
Anyway, just keep at it, enjoy it. |
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Tubby
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| ACAS4U - a full PHAT 11/10! |
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| same problem here as Vim, the drums are different I guess and they work on my nerves. All in all I think you need a lot more work on this track, so keep up messing with it! |
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ChaoticShadow
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| ACAS4U Rookie now off the mark |
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I hope this is helpful,
The bongos were fine at first but seemed to start to get on my nerves around 34 seconds into the song. Also at the end of the song the piano seems to come out of nowhere with a strong sound which makes it feel out of place. Just a suggestion if you had a little less bongo and if the piano started a little earlier and works its way up to the volume that you have it the song might sound a lot better. Just keep playing around with it and I’m sure it will turn out to be great. |
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