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RitchieRich
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Here's my entry for the competition, i'm not really as experienced as some here in making good tracks but i'm learning more each time i have a go
All and any feedback will be greatly accepted folks 
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edited (cheesy rhodes) Piano's dumped, bits and pieces tweeked, extra's added
10 ears are better than two
Edited....File deleted. Thanks for downloading and listening everyone rr |
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Last edited by RitchieRich on Tue Jun 21, 2005 10:57 am; edited 2 times in total
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dan graham
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| No need to feel embarassed about this one, good production. Really liked the beginning but then the cheesy rhodes come in! I'd get rid of them completely and maybe change up the drums a bit more to keep it moving. |
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Crin
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| Arh baby, ACAS4U's gotta hold on me. |
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| I agree with Dan, the percussion at the beginning is fantastic but those Rhodes or whatever they are are to abrupt for my liking. |
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RitchieRich
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thanks guys great feedback
i'll sort it |
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tim.gosden
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That track is cool! I didn't hear any cheesy rhodes, but there were these funny reversed samples in there at 1.46 that seemed a bit weird, I liked the scratching at the beggining:)
I think it needed more to keep interest and also more use of the samples provided I think the kinda d'n'b style bass line needed to develope more into a really melodic kinda thing aswell. Nice entry though  |
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RitchieRich
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thanks tim, great feedback, The wierd sound at 146 is a sytrus pad (poly prop) i added it to give the tune some trippy sound to break it up somewhat
cheers mate |
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fresh27
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| ACAS4U - a full PHAT 11/10! |
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| hey man.. the song is ok. not sure the extra vox works. and the bass seems to have been cut off or missing... |
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