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elmattic
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| Your beat sounds good, but it's too low in the mix and also sounds kinda muddy (even to me, who doesn't know a VST from a BMX). Tweak it and let's hear it again--it's a good & grimy track. |
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King Of Sorrow
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thank you man
i need more feedback please, also for my other remixes
come on guys i also gave feedback on your tracks =) |
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tisotars
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| ACAS4U Rookie now off the mark |

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| not really my thing, sounds a little shaky... |
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| aight, i'ma be as real as can be and simple. ODB sounds great on it, meth sounds aight but would've prefered u used another meth joint cause the chorus part doesn't go too good wit the beat. If u had like ODB thoughout it, then hell yeah this s**t should be a FN single F that. but get rid of meth or use another verse. Another chorus would be better, and the way u droped that ol Wu beat was hot too, hopefully i helped wit the feedback, it ain't bad, cause i've listened to worst, imean u on point and that means u already got ur s*** down packed. it ain't sumthin that i'll have to throw away, i did donload it and will be keepin it. |
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Last edited by MASSIVE TRIP on Fri May 02, 2008 5:29 pm; edited 1 time in total
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| Arh baby, ACAS4U's gotta hold on me. |

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I mostly agree with what MASSIVE TRIP said.
ODB was the best thing about this track!
The rest of it needs a little more work.
Keep it up bud
**PEACE** |
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mayowa
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It's pretty decent, I agree that the beat is fairly low in the mix.
But I like your beat, it sounds like an epic movie soundtrack from an indian movie imo., especially the violins.
I think the wu conflicts somewhat with your instrumental.
I also think you should switch up the instrumental chorus, the melody doesn't fit your instrumental. I wish I had an instrument with me so that I could suggest an alternative chord progression for the chorus... |
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dj magiccee
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i think the aca overpowers the track...
the track needs to be tweaked first...as said by someone else it sounds muffled...
then bleand evenly with aca....
imo as far as the mix the vocals are mixed in well with the beat.... |
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